The Revision Relay: Your Story in Motion

✨ Writing Prompt

Imagine your favorite narrative or experience that embodies a significant change or transformation in your life. Write a 700-900 word narrative essay capturing this moment in detail. Once you have drafted your essay, organize a group with fellow kinesthetic learners. Each participant will take turns reading or presenting their story aloud while engaging in a physical activity—such as walking, stretching, or tossing a ball. After each presentation, the listeners will provide constructive feedback based on what they heard. Each writer must revise their essay by incorporating at least three suggestions from their peers. Rework the narrative, focusing particularly on enhancing imagery, emotional depth, and structure, before submitting the final version.